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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2006-08-25 08:44 PM


brought by a cup full
this morning sight
of coffee
usually drank as hot
a dose known as beginning
though anytime
can be found to be accommodating
with a felt dropsy
into a place called relaxed
how indifferent
is this most altered
from what others know as
just to have-
are we possibilities
of predetermined actions
or are we
from sown habit
never to realize why
time is really
a hazardous commodity-
alone in a java world
from the usual spin
to take advantage
one wonders why
less often - is a feeling
not with opportunity
but can exist
without the production
of any thought.        

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1 posted 2006-08-25 09:23 PM


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