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croanthony3
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since 2006-08-03
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0 posted 2006-08-03 12:42 PM



I’m floating, neither here nor there.
Through sedated space,
upon the vastness,
then upon more vastness
with the promise of more darkness.
Dream…….., it’s yours……..Everything…
Who.. are you?
Everywhere..... It’s yours……
Who are you!?
Dream…….., it’s yours……..Everything…
Dream…see your blindness
You will awake
with your eyes open to the darkness.
What are you?
Silence!
You’re amongst the shadows!
Embrace stillness.
Relinquish… awkwardness in tune and tone
to a state of finesse.
May you strongest perish
So your weakest can flourish.
Listen!!
“A bounty….beauty……together"
If so ever you loose your footing,
Swap space,
retrace
and follow the soundless humming grace.

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