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loveislove
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since 2006-06-25
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0 posted 2006-06-26 08:51 PM


I want to be with you
I dont caer how
I want to be with you
Here and now
I'll wait for you forever
Even if we just stay friends
Like birds of a feather
We're friends to the end
I'll go to the ends of the Earth for you
And care for you with all my heart
I'd hope that you would do that same too
Like I've done from the start
You want to be with everyone
except the one that loves you
I know that I cant force myself upon you
But i want you to know my love is true

"when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join them in a mutual weirdness and call it love-true love"

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