Critical Analysis #2 |
Lost (comment please!) |
loveislove Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 59USA |
You hurt me I'm lost I someimes still cry I still want to die Feels like I'm dead Each day killing me a little more inside I slowly get better then I'm reminded of you of us our past the present hopes of a future But theres no hope You hurt me and now I'm lost "when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join them in a mutual weirdness and call it love-true love" |
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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
um i like it but there is alot of reapetiveness with die,dead, killng me right after each other. asome though |
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