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Critical Analysis #2

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Frank W. Torres
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since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

0 posted 2006-06-19 09:01 PM

       U.F.O.

   Hey! Look at that

   Look at that!

   Look!

   WOW!

kif kif
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since 2006-06-01

Posts 439
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1 posted 2006-06-20 03:35 AM

ok ok. So it's unidentified. So what?

...and it read's like your comments to others-no substance.

You must be posting in critical analysis for a private giggle, because I can't see any other reason, as in to improve your poetry and to improve your reading skills, otherwise you'd be more communicative.

Frank W. Torres
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since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

2 posted 2006-06-20 01:31 PM

Sometime I do not have any substance left. That was a very good call. Howver, the privit giggle is very much required. Long story. Anyway, I do want to say positive things about peoples work. And at this stage of my indifference to this that and other things substance itself is hard to come by. "Sitting here in limbo waiting for the dice to roll". And only faith itself keeps telling me the dice are going to roll.

kif kif
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since 2006-06-01

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3 posted 2006-06-21 02:15 AM

What are you waiting for? It's your throw.

Skippyrick
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since 2006-05-16

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Rohnert Park

4 posted 2006-06-21 04:02 PM

Yes by all means throuw the dice. Or pick up a deck of cards, playing or taro, make that a deck for old maid or Uno.

rick

YeshuJah
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since 2002-08-20

Posts 65
FL USA

5 posted 2006-06-22 10:49 AM

Do you honestly believe this remotely qualifies as poetry? Good God man! At leaset show some respect for the stated purpose of this forum.

YeshuJah.

kif kif
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since 2006-06-01

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6 posted 2006-06-23 04:04 AM

I think that's the point, Yeshujah. There is no respect here. Mr.Torres has already stated his indifference. A contradiction, considering the comment about faith.

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