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synthetic
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since 2006-06-10
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ontario, canada

0 posted 2006-06-10 02:20 PM



i'll be with you one day that's my plan
and we don't need to kiss just shake my hand
i love you did i mention that please be mine
but if you won't be my valentine that's just fine

so can we talk about your future and if it involves me
i can whisper my intentions into your ear so softly
i love you did i mention that please be mine
but if you won't be my valentine that's just fine

did you hear the rumour how they say i'm in love with you
i'd fight it but i don't know what's a guy supposed to do
he loves you did he mention it he wants you to be his
he's got three different sets of names for all your four kids

would you be my valentine just for the day
if your answer's no it's fine i'll be ok
no i don't love you just for kicks i swear that's all
just for the day we can walk around the mall
and pretend

so you turned the poor guy down he said he'd settle for a day
he told me he was so very sure this wish would go his way
did he mention how he loves you and how you look like an angel
he said he didn't understand how your ex wasn't faithful

listen i've got to be your valentine all i need is one chance
at showing you romance
i think i could pull it off because see the rumours were true
i've tried to fight it but the truth is i love you


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