Critical Analysis #2 |
This Poor Child |
AndiCandi New Member
since 2006-06-08
Posts 2 |
This poor child has immersed in its blunder; Has jumped the gun intended for due time. Caught in between phase adult and child, Partaken of mature deterrence—the lust. Now vain sensuality exploding from within An unprepared body whose lips taste the wine. But would rather the childish peace of frolic so The Mind’s duly growth has halted, for now. And still the innocence is broken, gone away. Flustered and refused, it escapes for no return. |
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Khatharsis Junior Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 42 |
I liked this peice alot. Vocab and poetic scheme was just fantastic. The msg was raw and i loved the way you descibed this. Very well done. |
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