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Your Friendship |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563
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When I reflect on times gone by, I feel The friendship we have shared so many years Has given me so much to help me deal With life, good times and bad, even the tears. You've always been there for me, by my side, Through sunny days or clouds as black as night, No storm could ever break us, or divide Our friendship, for we always find the light. I just could not imagine life without The caring you have given me, my friend, Your understanding ways, I have no doubt, Say much about the love you do extend. You are not only friend, but family, You've made this world a better place for me. P.S. Though I've used the rhyme scheme and format of a sonnet, I know that I have not used iambic pentameter. It is so difficult to achieve without using archaic words, and saying what you want to say. Even Shakespeare's sonnets did not have perfect meter (though for the most part, they did). So, in saying that, I will call this just a poem. Kris "It is wisdom to know others; It is enlightenment to know one's self" - Lao Tzu |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
I want more tension here (but you already know that). As a meditation on comfort and friendship, what concrete metaphors come to mind to reflect that? |
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