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No Turning Back
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No Turning Back |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent 
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There's no turning back, I fell to hard. I wish I could change things, but it's gone to far. It hurt me so much when you went away. I wish I could tell you, but what can I say? I was hurt and broken hearted. I was alone, and that's when it started. I don't really regret it. I wanted it to, but what I really wish, is that it had been you! There's no turning back, I've lost you forever. There's no turning back, you won't return ever. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Perfect!! I know this feeling! |
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Jasternal New Member
since 2006-01-22
Posts 8 |
1st line, "i fell to hard" do you mean "i fell too hard" i can relate to this poem. good job. |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
yeah thats what i meant thanks |
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