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LenMcC1
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0 posted 2005-06-08 08:37 PM


Here come stand by me
I am not afraid to talk to you
A story is waiting that must be told
One of heroism, lust, love, and blood
A happy ending do you ask?
Never ever happens in the past?

Troubles that bloom late in life
Seem to bring on the largest strife
Especially in matters involving our hearts
With no answers just wrong or right
Provoking the most horrendous fights
But mostly no one knows how they start

Then you learn what really happens
And suddenly burst out laughing
And suddenly burst out screaming
And run out into the evening
Not understanding a thought in your head
Just knowing that you’re dead

That is what has happened in this story
Seems like something kind weird
I don’t understand it much myself
I’m not a bird so I cannot fly
But I swear to god that I saw it all from above
The deception by him and her true love

And the events that ensued
You wouldn’t believe
She was so mad he had to bleed
And bleed he did, he bled like glue
Wet and sticky at first but drying quick
But like her love staying very thick

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