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some "t'erses" ... you add in yours, too.
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some "t'erses" ... you add in yours, too. |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
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trial balloon. Admin may consider -where- or -if- this thread belongs at PIP A "t'erse" is my short-form personal rhyme for Internet poets. Easy to make -fluff- which draws from the poet's screen name and -some element of perceived personality-. Humor or gentle observation is the keyword. Not mean. Not ugly,,, nothing worse than a gentle ribbing The t'erse is -singable- to the tune of "It Ain't Gonna Rain No Mo' No Mo'" -puns and word twists are free of charge -the final line is italicized and is a summary == b costen I can't get his drift and b costen I can't scan the price of that is diffidence abstraction's price? crits pan (one moment, I'll fLetch some others) [This message has been edited by netsky (04-02-2005 03:07 AM).] |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
of -course-, these are for critical review. Now... you must add in your own. You folks all know each other! Make the gift of personal verse to your favorite characters. === Not A Poet undercooks his name basting evidence au jus. net' dips him in a mild cheese sauce rarebits of poe for us |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
netsky trusts the firemen's net; he takes the leap on trust. The firemen laugh and netsky lands splat for peace he must [This message has been edited by netsky (04-02-2005 04:46 AM).] |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
Enchantress charms net' just in time wishing him a long, full life. net' accepts in nick of rhyme there's no hidden Passions knife |
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netsky Member
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Sunshine Administrator Member Caelestus since 06-25-99 Posts 51887 hearkening to a plains song "so don't be a stranger" === Sunshine harkens up a warmth not plains, but rich brilliance Gold and Yellow, Young and Mellow a lasting rememberance |
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netsky Member
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Nan Administrator Member Seraphic since 05-20-99 Posts 22104 Cape Cod Massachusetts USA ===== A man, a plan, now here comes Nan granting easement for waterway. Gracious She, she gives free land Panama hats all tip today |
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netsky Member
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Gentle Spirit Deputy Moderator 1 Tour Member Rara Avis since 10-09-2000 Posts 9569 ~Within A Dream ~ Lost In PA "... I am pleased to make your acquaintance, and hope you enjoy your time here." === Gentle Spirit frees up souls to glide freely, as like birds. Time flies too, as does all life fly safest nearest Gentle words |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
Martie Moderator Member Seraphic since 09-21-1999 Posts 21638 California 1 posted 03-29-2005 09:03 PM '...I look forward to more of your poetry.' === Martie shimmers lovely guise (please peek at her profile) Showering petals in net's new path rare rose; she scents my wiles [This message has been edited by netsky (04-02-2005 03:33 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love them...especially Martie's *s M |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
thanks. frankly speaking: all are rough hewn things. the female t'erses are my faves because females allow me to gush and mush. Note that guys' t'erses go in another direction as a rule. Martie's is almost -confessional- because she sees/you see that I admit that -she- (and all women) can spot buttery flattery from a mile away. Still, they like that... if it's sincere. which I am! But the guys? Are reserved and leery of this quirky, Puckish fellow making.. what? What the heck is this all about? -fun and attention for all Internet poets- personal verse is nourishing to giver and receiver alike. cheers, you're -next- ha ha |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
nakdthoughts thinks fine and free between velvet sheets of thoughts. What is the price of her love gained? some things cannot be bought [This message has been edited by netsky (04-02-2005 02:01 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some things cannot be bought... so very true ~~~ smiling thanks M |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
Nightshade Status: Member Patricius Date Registered: 08-31-2001 Last Post: 04-04-2005 Total Posts: 11341 Originating Posts: 319 Current Email: Send Email to Nightshade Homepage: http://www.darcejean.com/friends/our_garden.html Occupation: daydream believer Location: just out of reach Interests: Reading. Writing. Garden meditation. Fairies & Angels. ==== Nightshade plays me in soft light Shading, tuneful, music deft Fairy & Angel make a duet: Contrapunctual A to melody in F [This message has been edited by netsky (04-05-2005 08:06 PM).] |
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netsky Member
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Brad (Moderator) Status: Member Elite Date Registered: 08-20-99 Last Post: 04-05-2005 Total Posts: 3988 Originating Posts: 233 Current Email: Send Email to Brad Homepage: Occupation: Visiting Professor Location: Seoul, Korea Interests: poetry, writing, thinking, talking ICQ Number: Staff Desc: Passions ID: Defaults: Icon: 01 Font: Arial Encourage Critiques: Yes Critique Message: I just realized this wasn't turned on. There has to be an irony there somewhere. ===== Brad thinks sharper than a tack; he drives a wry point in. We sense best by hammer taps irony not missed by him |
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netsky Member
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Sadelite Member Elite since 10-11-2003 Posts 2483 1 posted 04-05-2005 07:06 PM as cute as a button and as true as blue!...Incidently, welcome to Passions! sadie ===== sadie alights upon my skin fanning irridescent color sharing sight exemplary sadielite soon on another |
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