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b.costen Member
since 2003-11-02
Posts 107ontario, CAN |
Skirts are warm enough again and make no mistake they will. knees are visible again tanned, crossed horizontally the wind knows that much and i know less |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
I like this even better and can't find an out-of-place line. I understand you are trying to minimize words but I would like a little more just to make the ideas flow smoother. |
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netsky Member
since 2005-03-29
Posts 148Miami |
only when the legs uncross may I know more, not less I get the poem. Cute! |
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