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b.costen
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since 2003-11-02
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ontario, CAN

0 posted 2004-12-28 02:39 AM


its a big deal
they let us go 120
when the sign says 100 max
we get 7 or 8 slaves
and a few kids for their dexterity
20 pages a mile
and forty miles a minute
that's about 800,000 kids a year
and still they let us go pretty fast, 120
but the gas goes
and the money flows
the earth cracks and we stop in front of the
11 o'clock news so mom can't see crap
then sit down to a steaming dinner 2 seconds later
roast turkey and bread up its ass
for me thats heaven and i feel like a king
masturbating for two hours to the internet's
diverse connections
doing whatever i want

[This message has been edited by b.costen (12-28-2004 04:08 PM).]

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