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b.costen Member
since 2003-11-02
Posts 107ontario, CAN |
the first line wakes you up so the second can astound you, stop, the third line will real you in four says KO; 1st round; I win this fifth would obey you better by now wants to feel you, let her the last was a mute— that last was astute number nine is just like you an uncorked youth scars under the eyes and 12 rips on her back pop through this one’s unlucky 14, thin, always getting hurt this one’s so you’ll know: poetry’s a flirt |
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