Critical Analysis #2 |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
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This is a very rough draft, I've been dry for a long time, so please help me with this one! It's just a simple one. ![]() --------------------------------------------- Run with me Run with you Let's be free just us two Share with me make me new Endlessly we'll be true Take this hand tie me down Here I stand in this gown Wear this band like a crown In dreamland we shall drown Words we say from the heart Make this day our own art Love won't frey it won't start Come what may we won't part XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo *~Serena~* "The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge [This message has been edited by PoeTik JusTice (09-17-2004 04:19 AM).] |
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