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Critical Analysis #2
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buckysimone
Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27
0 posted 2004-06-12 02:40 PM


Within a time
The world wouldn’t allow

The decisions hiding beneath
Baggage of lies
I’ve lied

I knew something was on my side, stopped at the drop of a hat.

Until they turned their minds onto me.

To speak the voice

The soft supple hand
Decisions beneath the surface
Which way will I go?

Garbage through your words
Un-tampered minds
Why are you?

I’m moving away
Are you being honest?
To you

It was a feeling
Unknown from the family

Problems
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Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2004-07-30 10:30 PM

Wow good stuff Keep righting!

Juju
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