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martiniat8
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0 posted 2004-01-06 04:42 AM


Return to me, Skye
because you've found these words
Return because you're my muse
Return because you never could say goodbye
Return because there is no reason for you to hide
Return because of Faith
Return to me because my lips you've secretly longed to taste

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Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-06 11:38 AM


"If you love something,,let it go,,if it comes back to you,,,,,,,,," words heard a million times, but they still hold true
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

ambrish
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2 posted 2004-01-08 01:21 AM


liked it, specifically the confidence revealed in the lines.
martiniat8
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3 posted 2004-01-08 10:34 AM


the problem is i think she is the one that let me go. so i guess i have to return, but not really sure who let who go. makes things problematic
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