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Critical Analysis #2
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Copperbell
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0 posted 2003-12-27 09:07 PM


Perched atop the heights
Our fists are full of flowers
Despite winters' chill.
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wintertao
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1 posted 2003-12-27 09:13 PM

very nice haiku much enjoyed, well done
hush
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2 posted 2003-12-30 12:00 PM

I think this is interesting b/c "winters'" implies that the chill belongs to more than one winter... indicating that this feeling has lasted for years. Very effective.
Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2003-12-30 04:34 AM

its true,,,real love stays over all the chills lifes "winters" have to throw
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike
Brad
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Jejudo, South Korea
4 posted 2003-12-30 07:15 PM

Nicely done.
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