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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
As I lie here, and wonder under where A tree stands high, Which now is bare, Then look down at my open fly, And wonder if I’m wearing any underwear, I wonder, and wonder where, O, where, has gone my underwear. Then, I thought about the tree Which stood so bold, As if it had been mocking me, And wondered if it felt a little cold, Standing there without its leafy skivvies. So, I gazed back up at the tree, And, hanging there, For all the world to see, Was my stolen underwear, Dangling in the breeze. Then, I noticed the other trees; In their branches, other people’s BVDs, And, beneath each tree, under where, Other people were lying there, With their dreams of stolen underwear. ______ It often comes to me at night, When lights are dim, and thoughts are bright, As I ponder what to write, Take pen in hand, and with it make My words appear as no mistake. Guided by a force unknown, I create a new and wondrous poem. ~Gene~ |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
LOL ... Love it..were there funny multi-coloured mushrooms under that tree?  Such wonderful commando of the language... < !signature--> May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. [This message has been edited by John the cat (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lol....Gene you are too much!!! Great poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hehehe, first only your Birthdaysuit and a smile, and now no underwear ?  LOL Hope you caught a dream though.  |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
ROFL good fun Gene saw the title tried to pass it up but.......just too nosy and......" Voila"....Gene writes briefly while naked LOL Jack |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
What a Fashion Statement!  Delightful, Read here U Gene I can count on U to make me smile Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
If you don't want to feel the breeze Never leave without your K C's A lesson for us all Good fun Gene Jon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Gene, This is too funny! Under where the under wear tree? FOFLM(BVDs)O! Great entertainment! Dennis :^) |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Thanks Everyone, Glad you all enjoyed the humor in this, but I wrote it as a deep philosophical and psychological treatise on the human spirit. LOL ~Gene |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
We knew that Gene |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Ahhh this is great gene!! LOL!! Isn't pyschological analysis absurd??¿ I love it. I'm always coming up with weird metaphors for life to share with my friends,they seem to get a real kick out of me comparing life to cream of chicken soup and such....i think i'll share this with them too!! LOL....great poem,you're a real master of the art =P swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Gene, This was GREAT. I really needed a laugh and this poem surely provided it. Enjoyed this very much. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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