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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Discarded Fascination There is a bolt laying on my sidewalk medium-heavy duty kinda fellow. Obvious from the grime and rest once perhaps a proud, shiny, new bolt. It lays upon a corner of unused concrete mocking from its piece of sunshine. Accentuated by the shadows of the fence closer and last year's weeds would conceal. It looks as though, once upon a life perhaps one of axles, machinery, perhaps wheels. Maybe a swingset or bicycle long gone might of been from last centuries farm. Oh, the scenarios that tinkle through the might have beans, the what do you thinks. Changing in a flash to would have almost a message in that lonely bolt. As the shadows dance and transform this piece of old, very used steel. In imagination captured; several lifetimes in the end, it remains. . . a simple bolt laying on my sidewalk. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` just got this back from an on-line submission, accepted of course...and all i gotta do is order another $50.00 book...humbug Put it on my homepage, and a lady challenged me to "not leave it there"! please see "Discarded, No More"... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is very clever! Well, on my way to the "Discarded No More"!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
bleeding, a most excellent job. This one stirs up old memories of childhood days for me. Just love what you saw in that bolt!! Great recover with #2 also. Alle |
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