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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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What Marriage Should Be First, marriage should be love all encompassing, total, and free. Love that grows stronger each day soft murmurs of THEE, THEE, THEE. Second, marriage should be sacrifice giving of self, regardless of reward. Gift gladly given, with open heart shielded from lifes' harsh sword. Third, marriage should be commitment utter loyalty, deep to the bone. Absolutely, no questions asked faithfully promised, never alone. Lastly, marriage should be forever family bonded, yet all still free. Lives joined with love, sacrifice, and commitment an eternity promised with.... THEE, THEE, THEE wrote this 12/96 just entered it into the new Montel Williams contest at poetry.com that i found in my email. Hey, i even get a 8x10 glossy of Montel {gasp...} bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Nice take on what Marriage should be, great job  LOL @ 8X10 Glossy of Montel in mail box. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
*sigh*...I hope that when I get married it is like what you describe. Wonderful poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
A lovely poem...Too bad too many marriages are me me me and not thee thee thee. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That's exactly what marriage should be! Very nice poem! Denise |
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