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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
To someday fall again in love You must allow yourself to dream Take the chance to open your heart To those who don’t plan and scheme Have faith that there is that one To complete your wandering soul Dare to keep your heart open to The love that will make you whole. The road may take a sudden turn To a place you weren’t headed for But who’s to know if you will find That one that you can adore |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Sharon! An open heart is definitely what is needed! Denise |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
...and yet there are those that by themselves chose to journey a little longer and prefer to wander. Great poem, O DeVine one!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what a sweet and touching poem...love like this does make us whole...your words are a beautiful thought. I'm running out of adjectives to describe all the talent I have found here. I could stay here for hours reading all these amazing poems. I feel like I have been given a gift. take care Janet Marie..."She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it." Matchbox20 |
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Exile Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 42 |
Thank you! I'm currently very alone, and this was a message of hope for me personally. Your work, like the best of the work here, does indeed touch the heart...and this one came when I particularly needed it. Thanks again. Exile |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful and very true poem PdV. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
I like this poem a lot. Kinda the place I'm in right now. --- Gene |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very well said, PdV. It is like a gift as Janet said. Thank you for sharing it with us. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such words of wisdom... If we don't allow ourselves to love, even knowing that's what we ultimately desire - it can be a very long solitary walk through life.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This poem made me think about just being open. Sometimes when your search too hard you forget to just relax and wait--open, that's when magic happens. Your poem was wonderful! |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Words I need to heed myself...thank you. --Jamie |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Thankyou for the reminder.. It was a beautiful poem.. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful poem, Sharon...I love it so much!! Poet deVine, There is love in each line! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for the hope |
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