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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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A TIME There comes a time in each man's life when that decisions hard are made. There comes a time in each man's life when that man is afraid. A space in time of aimless kind a searching of our own. A touching care a searching stare a feeling all have known. There comes a time for each and all to wonder at the sky. There comes a time when love we find and softly kiss goodbye. DanielJ.Burt 3/76 (all rights reserved) |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
There is definatly a lot of wisdom to this. Welcome to the Corener Pub. It's always nice to see new people with so much talent. Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is beautiful and so full of wisdom. What a poem, no wonder you got it published!! Welcome to the Corner Pub! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
I Agree this poem is truely rich in wisdom,  Enjoy!!!You failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thank y'all for the input and the warm welcome- please excuse the typo...then should not appear in line three{sigh} thanks again... b |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
well, not a lot I can say about this poem.. it is well written.. umm.. wise words.. aah.. ordered thoughts.. just... really good. ^_^ bleeding.. bleeding.. any reason for this unusual username? ^_^ sorry, i am a curious person.. hehe I like your poetry.. u have a lot of talent.. Lynne |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I agree. Wisdom abounds in your piece, Bleeding .... Congratulations on the publication .....  |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Excellent. Congratulations. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thank you, ah thank you very much bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 well done! |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
was this a preminision even then? what could i do to change things? can things be changed? Annie |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
tramp i guess the more things change the more they stay the same....thank you for the kind words Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ Not sure where I was (or wasn't) when this first appeared ... but I reckon I missed it~ Glad it came round again~ I ONLY liked THIS PART of it, though~  'There comes a time in each man's life when that decisions hard are made. There comes a time in each man's life when that man is afraid. A space in time of aimless kind a searching of our own. A touching care a searching stare a feeling all have known. There comes a time for each and all to wonder at the sky. There comes a time when love we find and softly kiss goodbye.' Yeppers ... that much !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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