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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere ![]() |
Look up, the sun shines. Tears blur in my eyes. Look down, the ground quakes. Waiting patiently, my heart breaks. Look behind, don't move to fast. Pain is coming, will it last? Look ahead, your future waits. Don't wait for me, I'll make you late. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
awww...how sad. it reminds me of my last relationship...didn't go over so well. but i loved this poem, good work ![]() sKiTtLeS "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
What a mournful little piece here...very lovely though. I love your poetry! Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Good Work, Modest, Sad ![]() Meaniningful Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
haunting little poem.... the last line struck a chord "Don't wait for me,I'll make you late" i enjoy your poetry....you always seem to put so much meaning into short,simple lines.... ![]() |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Beautiful piece of poetry Nicole Very sad though, living a day at a time and seeing the sunshine , a better plan than dwelling on the future I believe. Jack |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I agree with Kaile.. the last line stuck in my mind.. just amazing.. haunting.. yes, definitely haunting.. well written.. Lynne |
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