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Mrobi3543 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 29Philadelphia, PA |
The Sun _______ The sun wraps its arms around me and offers unadulterated comfort This comfort...this trust I have with the sun is fragile, but a foundation in my life At any given moment, the sun could be gone...in essence, completely destroying my life Spending too much time in the sun without protection is certainly bad for me Life without the sun would be cold and listless I learn from the sun how to comfort others and offer warmth Everytime I recognize its existence, I thank God it's there I love the sun My brother is the sun |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely piece, and so true too! Thank you for sharing it with us! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I feel the exact same way, the sun is my lifeline the feeling I get from it beating on my skin is like pure delight. Wow, I love this poem just thinking about gives me that warm fuzzy feeling. |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Myrobi Hi! Liked the Poem. I love the warmth of the Suns rays also, especially when they cloister upon my face in the morning Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Mrobi3543 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 29Philadelphia, PA |
I think I didn't write this too well. Those are the opinions I have about the sun, but I was trying to relate the sun to how I feel about my brother. I didn't do it too well. I believe I was too tired when I wrote this! I appreciate the replies. |
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