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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Cinquain Love Love? Wild Emotion, Drives you crazy! Two souls become one. Then the dream must end... Heartache. Hate Hate? Wild emotion, Makes you bitter! Souls ripped into shreds. Consuming and destroying the mind... Heartache. .....I'll get to the other challenges i.e the drinking challenge tomorrow!! Goodnight!! "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
well, i don't know what the challeng eis, that you were issued, and I don't know what 'cinquain means.. but I know I like this. ^_^ Lynne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is nice, Lizzie! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you for responding to my cinquain challenge....though these aren't exactly cinquains(cinquain is a 5-line poem with 1st line having one word,2nd line having 2 words,3rd line having three words,4th line having 4th words and the last line having one word) but nevertheless,these are short,neat poems and i enjoyed reading them  ")i like the way you use "wild emotion" and "heartache" in both poems ")allow me to try this ")Love Heart races Like an antelope knocking blindly into trees Delightful Hate Heart races Like a bull dashing madly onto people Frightening thank you 4 trying this out ")[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-19-2000).] |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
These are great, Lizzie. I find this much harder to do than haiku. ~Gene |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
What a pathetic poet I must be...told exactly how to write a cinquain and still manage to get the form wrong. Ok y'all, please pretend I didn't call these Cinquains and I'll give the Cinquains another go tomorrow! Thanks for all the replies! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Cool, Esp! I'd like to try this too. Did u find this in Poetry Challenge? Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Princess Poet, it is Kaile's challenge! It was posted in the Pub very recently...within the last couple of days or so. Thanks all for the replies! Kaile-I guess I should leave the cinquain writing to you! You managed to make my rudely crafted pieces into beautiful little cinquains. Hats off to you! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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