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PrincessPoet
Member

since 2000-04-15

Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.

0 posted 2000-04-16 03:04 PM

I am the Precious
Of a Creation,
The Fruitful Genesis
Of Life;
The Beauty
Of a Budding Rose,
I am the Gentleness
Of a Touch,
From a Butterfly:
In a Pond, as Shy as
The Drop of Dew
From a Lily;
I am as Sweet
As the Smell of
Fresh Chocolate,
The Savoring of
Homemade Pies
I am the Prompting
Of Words, The Seduction
Of a Sonata
And, The Humble Lure
Of my Opposite
I am the Transparent Elegance
Of Fine Crystal,
The Exquisiteness
Of a Diamond in the Rough:
The Sumptuousness,
Of a Mansion:
I am the Fawnest
Of a Kitten
The Laughter of Children;
And, The Jubilation of Praise
Suffice for any man,
The Fetish of One
Who Am I?
A Woman.
And, I am of Adam's Rib.

the bard
New Member

since 2000-04-14

Posts 6
Chapel Hill, NC

1 posted 2000-04-16 03:15 PM

that has gotta be the coolest title of a poem ever. "Adam's Rib". just by the title, you know it's a good one.

Ariadne
New Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 8

2 posted 2000-04-16 08:33 PM

i don't know you, but as a woman, this stirrs up volumes within me. right on.

-tara

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-04-16 10:48 PM

Very nice!

Denise

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

4 posted 2000-04-17 08:23 AM

Wow, this is so grand, I love it but maybe that's cause I am a woman, but I think it's more cause it's a fabulous poem with beautiful imagery.

LindaMac
Junior Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 23
Houston, Texas, USA

5 posted 2000-04-17 10:01 AM

Wow...these words are a cascading waterfall of beautiful imagery...I am woman! Surely hope the "Adams" will appreciate your poem as much as I do! It is truly awesome.

PrincessPoet
Member

since 2000-04-15

Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.

6 posted 2000-04-17 01:38 PM

Thanks, All

I Truely Welcome your comments & critiques I hope 2 get to read as much as you works as possible

Look for the beating heart

Poetry & Frienship,
From: PrincessPoet

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

7 posted 2000-04-17 01:56 PM

In a word, amazing! That could truly prove to be the best poem I have ever read! Hope to see more of you here soon.

Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

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