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A Tribute to Passionate Poets(and a cinquain challenge)
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Learning becomes great with great experts selflessly offering me great advice! this is an informal cinquain--it is a 5-line poem,with the first line having one word,the 2nd two words,the 3rd three words,the 4th four words and the last line one word... so here's the challenge:write me one informal cinquain looking 4ward to ur posts  ") |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I'll give it a go tomorrow evening....unless something drastic happens I won't get near my computer before then  I'll try a cinqain ASAIHT(As soon as I have time!)Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
From whence cometh cinquain Kaile. Telephone Rings once Rings then twice Then it rings thrice Hello Jack |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Sure Kaile. I'll give it a whirl. joy what's this? emotion like happy and something much more me! What do ya think? Btw, I loved yours and twinsgd's. Joy [This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
This is great.. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I've never done this before but here goes..... lost I seek memories of me blank pages are returned empty |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Me having fun with writing poems like when I was young God bless you all. :-) -debbie- |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you all for responding to this challenge ")i appreciate your efforts.... ")twinsgd,i love the way you go "rings once,then twice,then thrice"--very clever indeed ")Hello. Hello Hello?? Hello Hello Hello???!!! Who is this speaking? Damn! joy14,allow me to write this for you ")JOY~ Invincible feeling~ I can conquer Anything at the age Fourteen!!! to childomine, Pages I fill With my poetry- A great way to Remember! to archicade, Smiling Brightly cos I have fun Writing this for you. Pleasure |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
thanks. Sometimes I don't know about that invincible thing! But I'm getting older and wiser as each day goes by. I might have to change my name or something. I'll be 15 soon.  Joy |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Ooooh Thank you for the compliment Kaile. May I suggest you say "Hello" just once...not nearly so likely to get annoyed....LOL. As I asked where did "cinquain " originate? Jack |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hey, thanx Kaile so THAT'S what a cinquain is. ^_^ thanx.. ok.. I'll give it a go.. informal cinquain take 1 Think Swirling thoughts A dozen ropes knotted in my mind confusion Nah, don't like it.. hehe.. k, here is a better one.. I hope.. informal cinquain take 2 Clouds Let fall tears for today Weep gently, oh sky, Rain well.. hehe.. anyway. ^_^ thanks for this challenge... now I know what a cinquain is.. hey, what is a formal cinquain, if this is INFORMAL? Lynne |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Ok, kaile, here goes. Me plus you equals we two our hearts, bound together forever. What do you think? Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you,Yu Lan and Joannak.very commendable attempts,both of you ")  yes,Yu Lan,i do agree your 2nd attempt is better than your first....anyway,here's my respond to your cinquains.... Train Chugging Away Rocket blasting upwards Like my million thoughts Galloping Sagging Plants rise, Their mouths wide Savouring sweet rain drops Life-saver your second attempt appeals to me...it has a childlike quality attached to it...like a child staring in awe at the falling rain,appreciating its beauty.... to Joannak,just a short,simple,sweet delightful love poem...enjoyed it immensely ") String Links hearts Together,tightly secured Cherishing it for all Eternity... now,that was a lacklustre attempt...never been good at love poetry...i hope you won't mind ") sorry,twinsgd,i have no idea as to its origin either |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi, anyone else game to have fun with such a form?  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
reading these words from fine poets wish it was me *sigh* |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
tasting these words from fine poets wish it was me *sigh* LOL the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Playing With words Trying to write An original informal cinquaine. Difficult! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
pegasus, you echo my sentiments exactly...but its good to read these fine words anyway... kcs, you cheated!! but that gave me a chuckle...i wonder why i never thought of writing that before....who else likes to try? |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Cheated! Who, me??? Okay, how about this?Warmed By words Of passion's fire Telling me your heart. Love! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Burning Feeling inside I see now A black charred wall Oops... Little Spyro T. Dragon< !signature--> Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. [This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Kaile.... This is my VERY FIRST attempt at this so please bear with me. Precious Their hearts Engulfed in love Innocent of all reality Children How'd I do? hehe Best [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Where Do I Start and End My very first informal Cinquain? Dennis  Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
Straddeling Two Worlds, Divided Against Myself, Love - Hate - God - Fate O'Inspired. -*-*-*- does this count? |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hahaha!!! Hello Hello Hello... etc etc... That one's SOOOOo FUNNY!!!!! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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