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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2000-04-14 02:38 PM

Ambivalence

Ire suppressed,i laugh
Yet my heart weeps
at my traitor-friend

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-14 03:29 PM

I love this....it's really pretty.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-14 08:54 PM

Very nice!

Denise

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

3 posted 2000-04-15 02:59 AM

Short and simple.. I like it alot..

MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-07-03 01:23 PM

thanx ESP,dsynder and Broken_Winged_Angel for replying

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

5 posted 2000-07-03 02:19 PM

Kaile,
I like this a lot! You just keep getting better & better!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

6 posted 2000-07-03 11:52 PM

hey your makeing me look bad. ( Just Joking). like this very much keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

7 posted 2000-07-04 08:49 PM

Oh well done kaile! ^_^

Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

8 posted 2000-07-05 01:59 AM

Simply done and beautifully said. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

9 posted 2000-07-07 11:41 AM

I'm dumbfounded! Such a few words can actually convey so deep a meaning! Golly I'm in heaven!! *S* Love it

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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