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JC Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
When I fell in love with you When I fell in love with you I didn't really know, how much you'd come to mean to me, or how our love would grow. When I fell in love with you I didn't stop to think, that all along I should have known you were my missing link. When I fell in love with you I didn't actually see, the love my heart could hold for us, a brand new you and me. When I fell in love with you I looked into your eyes, and found beneathe the sadness, a longing for no lies. When I fell in love with you I promised to be here, through happiness and sadness too, I'd wipe away you're tears. When I fell in love with you, you stole away my heart, and from that moment on, I knew "WE" had to start. When I fell in love with you I swore I would be true, we'd travel through lifes journey, together, me and you. ~Jenn 4/2000 |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Wonderful poem.  I have a feeling that this is just one stanza of many. ~Gene |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Wonderful poem!!! There is so much you can do within the boundaries of love. Fair warning though, there are no boundaries. I hope your love grows and prospers! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful love poem, Jenn! Very beautiful! Denise |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Wonderful sentiments here Jenn. And I agree with Gene, this poem could go on and on. "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything." - anonymous |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Brilliant.. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wonderful, wonderful poem, thanks for sharing it here. |
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JC Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
Thank you all so very much for all your kind comments. I'm really enjoying this forum. ~Jenn~ "Nature's first green is gold, her hardest hue to hold. Her early leaves a flower, but only so an hour. Then leaf subsides to leaf, and Eden sank to grief. So dawn goes down today, nothing gold can stay." Robert Frost |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very nice poem thanks for sharing it with us Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Wow, Jenn, this is very touching, you are actually quite rational about this love business. I suppose it's your own feeling, I enjoy this a lot. Keep on with it, you can definitely 'travel through life's journey together'.. ^_^ Jõmes |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
This is wonderful! I love the way it flows.. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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JC Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
Thank you Star, James, and Broken!! I'm enjoying reading everyone's work as well as everyone's insightful comments. I'm finding my "escape" here! Thank you all. ~Jenn~ "Nature's first green is gold, her hardest hue to hold. Her early leaves a flower, but only so an hour. Then leaf subsides to leaf, and Eden sank to grief. So dawn goes down today, nothing gold can stay." Robert Frost |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful sentiments, beautiful poem ..... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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