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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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**************************************************** Gentle raindrops fall Flowers stretch to get a sip Refreshing cool drink **************************************************** Squirrels playing tag With graceful acrobatics Jump from tree to tree **************************************************** Rainbow arcs with Joy Sunshine illuminates Peace Dark clouds sudden flee **************************************************** |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like them, Dennis - especially the "Rainbow arcs with joy...".. nice job..  |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
These are wonderful Dennis. My favorite is the first, ..."Flowers stretch to get a sip".... ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful work here, Dennis .... my favorite is the third ..... "Rainbow arcs with Joy Sunshine illuminates Peace Dark clouds sudden flee" Very beautiful .... |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Beautiful images, Dennis.  ~Gene |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Is it ok if I love them all Dennis ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Very, very, very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Wonderful imagery, Dennis MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
These are brilliant just like the other three of yours that I just read! I love your haikus, I never thought much about haikus before, maybe I will now! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thank You for all your kind replies, these are fun to write, try some for youself! Dennis :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what can i say?except that i like them all |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
All haikus are great. My favourite is gentle raindrops fall flowers stretch to get a sip refreshing cool drink That is so well written, I can picture it in my mind. You are so good at haikus! Do share more! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
more great haikus "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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