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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Twas a dark, stormy night, When all that was wrong Seemed only to be right, A life was lived long The world was peaceful, War ceased to exist Food was plentiful, And pain was forgotten Then the doors where open, Shadows roamed free Demons came out, To haunt you and me Families were killed, Starvation was true The dying race, Depended on you Out came your sword, Your shield you held high The stallion you rode, Chased demons all night Now your praise is sung, All around town The shadows you fought, Justice brought down. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
What a great poem. May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a really good poem. Who is the knight in shining armour riding the steed and bringing justice to pass? Must be quite some guy!! I love this poem! "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I really like this. I thought of Revelations. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
It's just so good. I have a lot to learn. Jõmes |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Excellent Angel. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem! I always like it when justice prevails! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
BWA, A fantastic poem! The imagery leap off the page! WELL DONE! Dennis :^) |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Ahhhh.....nothing like a good story of chivalry!! =] swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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