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Mrobi3543 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 29Philadelphia, PA |
Blasphemer __________ Words uttered out of my mouth daily, I find myself always the blasphemer. The words roll off my tongue as easily as water flows down the river. It's a laugh a minute. Each additional word adds to my wounds. Almost as if I can't control it, my tongue takes on a life of its own. I find myself wondering...why are you saying these things? Behind the scenes, I struggle with this imperfection. I struggle for redemption. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I used to blasphemize alot, while I was at boarding school. I have stopped though, I don't allow myself to anymore. I hope you too mange to get out of that viscious circle. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
A new way to look at a century old problem. Very good work. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Although of good heart, a loose tongue can bring us downfall. Enjoyed this poem. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I pray this poem is a first step on your road to finding redemption, you expressed your feelings very well in this poem, thanks for sharing it here with us. |
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
Really good poem on a problem most of us have faced, I pray you find your way back. May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The tongue does have a way of taking on a life of its own. I think all mankind struggles with this problem. Great poem! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Mrobi, I sure can relate to this, but once I had children, I used as a rule of thumb, What can't be spoken in front of them would probably be best not spoken at all. I don't always take my own advice but it definately helps put things into perspective. Your poem was a thought provoking work, well done. Dennis :^) |
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Mrobi3543 Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 29Philadelphia, PA |
That's a good rule...what you can't say in front of children, you probably shouldn't say. Thanks everyone for the comments... |
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