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Sifting Through Time

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-04-10 06:10 PM

Sand
between
my
fingers
Sifting
sand
taking
up
time
slowly
For
when
the
grains
slip
trough
I'm
gone
and
won't
be
back
again.

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

1 posted 2000-04-10 07:56 PM

Well
this
is
different
I
like
it
lots

Gene

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-10 08:57 PM

Those grains sift quickly! This is very nice, Joy!

Denise

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

3 posted 2000-04-10 09:21 PM

Definitely like the way you wrote this. The sands of time - swiftly they sift through our fingers.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

4 posted 2000-04-10 10:21 PM

Thanks! I decided to do something a little different today and I like the result.

Joy

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