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World's Wet Kiss

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

0 posted 2001-04-05 11:59 AM

Curls to the moon
Caress the sand
World’s wet kiss

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-05 01:56 PM

Thanks for posting your little intense poem. Joyce

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

2 posted 2001-04-05 07:58 PM

I did that once, Andrew,
when I finally returned home.
Ya know, I think the moon smiled.

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

[This message has been edited by coyote (edited 04-05-2001).]

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2001-04-06 02:25 AM

aich, hey man, change your "constructive critiques" message.. take out the amateur piece.. I like this. ^^
-Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

4 posted 2001-04-06 07:19 AM

nice.
Lately I've been reading a lot of short poetry, I admire it, I can't do it

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2001-04-06 05:49 PM

You have said so much, in so few words. Great job!

Betty Lou Hebert

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