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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Thy Knight Of Mind Thy forest air it bleached thy sight to walk I do within thine own fright savored dignity alone I beseeched solemnly now to thee I so reach. Thy steed is ready for thine mount no distance rode shall ever count as when avenging for thine crown thy weaker knights alas will drown. In anguish now I sit awaiting news did thy sought knight win or loose battled on now curse thine ground thy knight of mind gone not found. Cold anger defiles thine loud wrath thy knights suffered ye bloody bath no dignity inherit can save ye souls I shalt set ye to char o'er thy coals. Canst now thine desires ever devour thee knights who guard o'er thy tower forthright ye only dismiss thine name hence royalty hast played thy game. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I have one word for you: Brilliant! I love the way you portray life in such nifty(for lack of better words) ways. Thanx! Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another great one, Esmeralda! Denise |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Another good one indeed Esmeralda, enjoying these. Jack |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Beautiful! I love the style you have chosen for your poetry. I could never write anything this elegant. Well done! "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything." - anonymous |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
This is great. I think some how i see many of your poems as lessons from the past that still hold true now.Very wonderful =P i love your poetry. swampie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Alicia, Your pedelstal of me is much to high especially since I'm afraid of heights. Thank you most kindly, I'm glad you enjoy what I am writing, for it's a new experience for me. Denise, Thank you, fine lady. Jack, So glad you are enjoying, I thank you for reading them. Jonas, never say never, this is not something I ever dreamed I would be doing, yet here I have an audience that makes me feel I'm doing it right when I just feel amazed. Thank you very much for your kind words, just know you could do this also, if I can. swampie, Thank you very much, this is very fun to portray poems this way, most write themselves so if there's a message maybe I am one of those people, gee I can't think of their names where people talk through them. Anyway glad you enjoy. |
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