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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Think of Me If you come back tonight, Sit down, put out the light, Just sit and think of me, And all the things that we can be, The places we can go, The knowledge we can know. The words of love that we can say, To one another every day, The touching things which we can do, You touching me, me touching you, The wondrous lessons we can teach, The heady heights that we can reach. The pretty places we can go, The thoughts that only we will know, The sights that only we will see, Me loving you, you loving me, If all of this is what you need, This poem will have sown it's seed. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Cat this is very good. I hope the seed has taken so the growing can begin. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
That is soo sweet. I like the way you write. Such wonderful words for a poem that is larger than life. It seems like love is everyone's main goal, but you make that a good thing. Thank you, that was utterly inspiring. I hope your seed grows and prospers. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful words, John! Absolutely lovely! Denise |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Beautifully expressed and nicely written. ~Gene |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
JTC--Another absolutely lovely poem. I believe that, with the proper nuturing, a seed can grow almost anywhere it is sown. You have offered the seed a lovely foundation from what we see written here. "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
These seeds are sown in cyber space But these words you see...have no face. It must be manna from above Just sit right down in the Pub of love. Jon |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
This is another poem that reads so very well John the Cat......so much talent. Jack |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
John, I hope your seed germinates and blossoms ten-fold. This is lovely. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Thank you all for your kindness. I fear the seed is sown on infertile ground. |
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