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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
"cope" a stained knife the helpless cries blood & tears mixed with silent goodbyes a new life taken a loved one gone words without sound a day without dawn the surrounding darkness covers my face each day is a sleepwalk i live in a daze trying to grasp the remaining hope everyone around you tells you to "cope" they don't enderstand how hard it can be to deal with the death that began with your plee |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Alicia this is so very sad and you wrote it in a way that the pain of loss is felt. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The ones who just tell you to 'cope' are the ones who haven't yet lost someone close. It is the hardest thing to go through in this life. Well written. Denise |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
So sorry for your loss Alicia... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I am so sorry for your loss, Alicia. This is a powerful expression of your grief, thank you for sharing it with us. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
A poem that radiates Pain and grief. No one can "cope" with it, but time will heal just be patient. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Thank you all again. You say such wonderful things! Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Alicia, This is so heart-felt and deep. I am relating it to an experience I had and you describe some of the emotions I went through as if it had been me who wrote this. Very moving for me. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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