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songwater Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32Marietta,Ga. |
The raven came and landed on my window sill In the kitchen window late last night He said he had a real good story to tell about all the mystery in a raven's life. The raven spoke with the voice of an ancient soul You had to stop and ask yourself why take a look at the world take a look at your self If you could see the world through a raven's eyes. The raven's shadow sihlouettes against the sky The shifting sands have slowly pulled away Looks like were going to get some rain soon The raven's cry is never far away. Soaring freely across the great blue sky A little speck as the world goes by A speck so small it hardly can be seen Down below the grass don't look so green.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions and to the Pub, Songwater! This is a unique perspective! Very creative! Denise |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Definitely a new slant. I like it. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
"Down below the grass don't look so green" Good ending.  Joy |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Welcome to the Corner Pub. Nice piece, I enjoyed reading it. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Very interesting, I enjoyed this poem, Welcome to Passions. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Great poem,sometimes you really have to wonder what life is like to someone else.Even an animal's perspective can be interesting =]I enjoyed your poem alot =] welcome to the pub!! swampie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem...welcome to Passions!! I bet having your new perspective around will be very enjoyable. I look forward to seeing more of your work! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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