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The Mirror Clock |
Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
If it were in my power to create An invention That would help mankind I would create The Mirror Clock This clock would work miracles One at a time For all who looked into it At any given time This clock would help us all From making foolish mistakes For when we looked into It's mirror like face It would show the future results Of our ill chosen choices When parents or teachers Or other concerned ones would say Please don't do that It will harm you someway We could look in the mirror clock And then we would see a reflection Of what our future would be For instance When parents, doctors and others Warned us not to smoke We could look in the mirror And see a person, old before their time Using inhalers in order to breath Just barely able to walk across Their living room floor So many things this mirror might show The results of unwise decisions Those that may have never crossed their mind But of course maybe this mirror clock Really isn't needed, if only we would Look around at the many examples Of those all around who Indulged in the vices And are now living or dying Examples of unhealthy living |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes a mirror clock would be nice, but even then not everyone would listen. It won't happen to me. We all have illusions of immortality. Joyce Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This would be a wonderful invention and think how much heartache it would save so many people. Good treatment of this subject. Betty Lou Hebert |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is an interesting and thought-provoking idea. It sounds like a life-saver, but perhaps it would need to show alternate realities? For instance, if I had looked into such a clock and seen the heartbreak I would experience, I might not have married my ex-husband, but then I would not have my three children and my grandchild. Sometimes what seems like a bad consequence actually has some good mixed with it. Still, I have often wished for such an invention. Thanks for making me think today. To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what an original poem!!! Kathleen Blake |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Love your ingenuity, Songbird! It made me think of the 'alternate universe' theory - looking in the mirror could show one universe... Cool idea! Lary |
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