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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Nature The beauty I see is so new to me Having never realized the delicate wonder of a spring breeze as it hisses quietly through the tall grass Turning the green earth into an undulating ocean swell The majesty of such overwhelms me Opening my eyes to the incredible artistry of nature's hand © 4/1/00 Gary Pence < !signature--> Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe [This message has been edited by Jonas (edited 04-01-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jonas....I think your poem is the poainting and you are the artist. This is magical!! Makes me want to go outside and play in the grass!! Excellent... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I agree. The incredible artistry of your pen |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful poem....your words are the paints, the poem is the picture. Lovely. Love and hugs, Lizzie |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Gary, beautiful and vivid. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Gary, your words have indeed painted a lovely picture! WOW! This is absolutely beautiful! Denise |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you for your kind words everyone. I love how nature gives us beauty that words fail to adequately describe...but it doesn't stop me from trying. "Writing is easy. All you do is stare at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead." -Gene Fowler |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is fabulous, you just brought a beautiful scene to my mind with your wind swept painting of words. Thanks for brightening my day with sunshine written. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
This is so beautifully written, so vivid you can put yourself right there in the middle of it. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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