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Local Rebel
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0 posted 2000-01-13 02:17 PM


She sat
Perched on Maslow’s
Barstool and looked
Down at the barbed wire rungs
Musing hands sliced
And cleavage spent

He saw her from
Atop a red nail
Saw his own reflection
wanted
A drink
From the tallest shotglass
And sipped it

Slowly

And when he saw her
Looking down
At barbed wire
He said

Shutup and Kiss Me



 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-13 05:16 PM


A man of few words, I see, who appreciates the finer points of courtship! hehehehehe
Thanks for sharing it here, LR!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-01-14 08:45 AM


Ok...so what if she was telling him the secrets of the world..or like how to cure cancer..or what to do with all those spare socks the dryer collects..or how to cook a pot roast..or which dry cleaner is the best..or why Ty Cobb was the greatest baseball player ever..or ... oh! Ok..I'll shut up!  

Saxoness
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3 posted 2000-01-14 09:41 PM


Ya know, i like your style!  

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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4 posted 2000-01-19 03:16 PM


Thanks for posting it here. I'm not in adult, so I would have missed it and I like it !  
Local Rebel
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5 posted 2000-01-20 09:28 AM


You are all most kind.  The author thanks you.  
Pepper
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6 posted 2000-01-20 03:28 PM


This brought a smile....enjoyed this much LR......

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



Broken_Winged_Angel
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7 posted 2000-04-14 03:06 AM


  This is great!

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

Local Rebel
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8 posted 2000-04-14 11:43 AM


Wow -- thanks Broken Wings...

I'm surprised this one got dug back up!!

if you really like this one it's availiable on audio at my site..
http://www.geocities.com/nighthawke700/

Pepper
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9 posted 2000-04-14 12:18 PM


I see you're a man of action, Rebel ..  
Too cute .....

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

ESP
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10 posted 2000-04-14 12:45 PM


lol...great poem!! Glad you reposted cos I don't belong to the adult forum cos I am kinda underage!! I  loved it!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Local Rebel
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11 posted 2000-04-14 02:04 PM


Well, it's like my Dad always told me Pepper... the answers always no till you ask...  

Thanks everybody..

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
12 posted 2005-07-23 10:39 PM


~smiling~

M

iliana
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13 posted 2005-08-15 05:10 PM


*Chuckling* at this one.  lol
Becky Mangrum
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14 posted 2006-10-20 07:55 AM


Enjoyed the Poem, very nice and love the screen name too.
effjayel
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15 posted 2008-02-07 08:54 AM


A very powerful Write!

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