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Shutup and Kiss Me (repost from adult -- but it isn't THAT adult) |
Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
She sat Perched on Maslow’s Barstool and looked Down at the barbed wire rungs Musing hands sliced And cleavage spent He saw her from Atop a red nail Saw his own reflection wanted A drink From the tallest shotglass And sipped it Slowly And when he saw her Looking down At barbed wire He said Shutup and Kiss Me How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A man of few words, I see, who appreciates the finer points of courtship! hehehehehe Thanks for sharing it here, LR! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok...so what if she was telling him the secrets of the world..or like how to cure cancer..or what to do with all those spare socks the dryer collects..or how to cook a pot roast..or which dry cleaner is the best..or why Ty Cobb was the greatest baseball player ever..or ... oh! Ok..I'll shut up! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Ya know, i like your style! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thanks for posting it here. I'm not in adult, so I would have missed it and I like it ! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
You are all most kind. The author thanks you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This brought a smile....enjoyed this much LR...... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
This is great! MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Wow -- thanks Broken Wings... I'm surprised this one got dug back up!! if you really like this one it's availiable on audio at my site.. http://www.geocities.com/nighthawke700/ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I see you're a man of action, Rebel .. Too cute ..... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
lol...great poem!! Glad you reposted cos I don't belong to the adult forum cos I am kinda underage!! I loved it! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Well, it's like my Dad always told me Pepper... the answers always no till you ask... Thanks everybody.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
*Chuckling* at this one. lol |
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Becky Mangrum Member
since 2006-10-18
Posts 56 |
Enjoyed the Poem, very nice and love the screen name too. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
A very powerful Write! |
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