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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Regardless of what you think I do not want to argue with you anymore The very thought of it tires me Can't we just close that door? I promise to do my best To tell you how I really feel If you promise to listen to me Do we have a deal? All the screaming and shouting Does no one any good It is like you versus me Who is understood? There are no winners in this race Just an endless uphill battle A struggle for you and for me Will we fall from the saddle? I will give you my opinion If you tell me how you feel This is about you and me What will the truth reveal? That at times we disagree Do not see eye to eye One view for you another for me Can compromise be where the solution will lie? Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good poem! This is the way to get along..listen..compromise and communicate.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We can only try Lone Wolf, be the best you can be, and then you'll know the fault doesn't lie there with you. If you aren't true though it does... Wonderful wise words!! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
this is a fabulous poem i am about to email it to friend of mine thanx |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Communication is essential to any successful relationship. This expresses that well! Denise |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
This was great Sending it to a friend too !! "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This should be a wall hanging in everyone's homes. What a message you have in here, it's excellent. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
L.W., So very well said. Communication is usually the primary factor to a successful relationship. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
After reading this I will try harder. Thank you, an eye opener. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
PDV...thanks and we are giving that a try. Isis...I know and I am trying to do all I can. Have to....means too much to let it slip away. wondrous....wow!!! Thank you and that is the best compliment!!! Hope it helps!! Denise....I am learning. Without communication, we have nothing. SG...Wow again!!! Thank you, that is touching for sure!!! LD....never thought I'd get this response. Of course they are my feelings so I do not look at it in that way. Just written for a special someone. Sheila....thanks and yes it is. John...hope it helps you. You are welcome. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
The dignified resolution...."Compromise" A fine poem Lone Wolf |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Lone Wolf this is very good. So often we're stuck in what we think and want and then there is no room left to hear (really hear) the other person. Very good message. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Lone Wolf--This is a wonderful poem! Oh, the wonderful art of compromise. Thank you for sharing this. "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
twinsgd...thank you. The response to this post has amazed me. Wrote it for a special someone who also appreciates it. Perhaps I should have titled it "Compromise"? childomine...thank you. I try to live my life this way, but think I failed miserably lately. freckles...you are welcome and thank you for the wonderful comments. ---------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Compromise is definitely the answer here. Nobody is the same and maybe we are all right. Therefore we must respect each other's opinions, right? I hope you manage to find this compromise with your loved on. Great piece of poetry!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie |
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