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The third, so this is a trilogy huh? LOL - Flying
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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You come to me, you take my hand You gesture to the sky You don't say a word, yet I understand It's time for me to fly Suddenly I'm not so sure What if perchance I fall You'll be there, you reassure You'd never let me fall Haltingly, I stretch my wings Towards the bright blue sky The wind whispers, my heart sings Hey look at me - I can fly!!! I'm floating on the air I'm soaring through the clouds As I fly without a care You look at me, so proud Your love beneath my wings, guiding me Urging me higher to touch the stars Feelings soothe and overwhelm me And remove from my soul the last bars My laughter drifting on the breeze, a once forgotten sound My love I could never thank you, for reminding me to fly You healed my broken wings, made chains come unbound... The wind whispers of my love for you and a tear falls from your eye < !signature--> "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ [This message has been edited by StarrGazer (edited 03-26-2000).] |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Ahhhhh! How lovely  I have often dreamt of flying too. Your poem makes it seem possible. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
StarrGazer, I was about to ask you to extend that lovely first poem you once wrote. It seems you did and you did it so well ! Very good !  |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Starr, Great poem. Now you've got your trilogy, until you write a fourth.  ~Gene |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Beautiful Starr. And as Gene says - how about a fourth?? ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Starrgazer! Denise |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
John the Cat, Munda, Gene, Childomine, Denise - thank you all for your comments .... A fourth hmmmmm what would that be a quadrilogy LOL "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Star, This is quite beautiful. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Starr, Very beautiful and romantic. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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