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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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Ok two poems for the price of one click!! kind of like a before and after thing ... ~*Broken Wings*~ I wish I could fly But I've got broken wings Why must we always wish For impossible things? I was shot down by a hunter He broke my wings and stole my heart I've tried to get on with life I'm just not sure where to start It's no fun being on the ground When wings once touched the sky I would do anything... Some one teach me once again to fly!!! ~*Chains Unbound*~ A tangle of emotions chains unbound smoldering embers lost yet found jumbled up words a shy grin dazzling eyes I'm lost within the touch of your hand the sound of your voice falling hard not wanting the choice abandoning fears tearing down walls surrendering willingly to love's sweet calls soaring in heaven bright blue sky thank you my love for reminding me how to fly !!! "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
Aint love grand... |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Two for the price of one! These are great, Starr. I like how they go together, but what about making it into a trilogy? There could be a third one that ends with the last two lines, And for all eternity Together, we will fly --- Or something like that. ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
These are great, Starrgazer! I like Gene's idea for a third one too! Denise |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
William- love disgusied as a great friendship but yes I'd have to agree  Gene- trilogy idea sounds kind of neat I didn't plan on these two poems even coenciding together I wrote the first months ago and the second today send it to my "friend" and he reminded me of the first one but hmmm trilogy maybe who knows Denise- Thanks "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Starr - I third Genes idea for a third! These are absolutely beautiful. I too like the way you tied them together. So -- how about a third??? ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow Starr!! Double your pleasure, double the fun. . . You always seem to have such an excellent understanding of what feelings are in your heart. . . and that's what makes your writing so excellent. . . Okay, I want a third too!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
I enjoyed these two poems so much…the first trust broken by love. the second reaching out to trust and allow love to lift you again. Thanks Tess "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
These are great and what a good idea...a trilogy ! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Amazing what a little word like LOVE can do! Tear you apart, lift you up.....WOW ~X~ |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Ok, you know that I LOVED them both....and the idea of a third...flying for eternity...is a great one. take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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