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Wendy Flora
Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 182
Virginia

0 posted 2000-03-20 01:27 AM

With the precision
of a music box

Poetry is plucked
from the air and

Allowed to ring for
one infinite moment

Before fading to an
immemorial silence.

why not
Junior Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 10

1 posted 2000-03-20 02:33 AM

It´s interesting how you describe the impact of a poem. I sometimes feel as if I was looking at a photograph when reading a poem. I like the idea of a"fading into an immemorial silence".

why not

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2000-03-20 02:44 AM

I can hear this. Its sounds wonderful.

Wendy Flora
Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 182
Virginia

3 posted 2000-03-21 01:40 AM

Much thanks... any ideas for titles? I'm stumped. -wen

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

4 posted 2000-03-21 08:06 AM

I really like this. Can't help you with a title suggestion just yet though. Nice read.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

5 posted 2000-03-22 09:08 AM

How about "Poetry's Moment" for a title?

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