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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I hope you people are not sick of my tries at haikus yet, because I don't give up too easily. ![]() Gentle fingers press Onto leaves of fresh, green life Nature's touch caress Tapping dancers step Rain drops described to move free Pelting wet on stones Thanks for reading! Don't worry I won't put you through too much more of this. There are plenty of other talented haiku oriented poets here for you to enjoy. And I can't wait to go back to my free style, (don't worry 'bout the sylables) poetry. But DON'T think I won't stop writing haikus and trying other kinds of poetry. ![]() Joy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
These are great Joy! Don't stop!! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
These ARE very good Joy. I've noticed a BIG change from the first to these. Excellent and - don't stop now, you've got it!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hey, thanks very much! I'm glad. And I knew I would get it..... eventualy. lol! ![]() Joy |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Joy, I can tell you've been studying haiku. These are great. Keep 'em coming. ![]() ~Gene |
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