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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Little bird slips and falls "Don't be scared" smiles the mother bird Wings spread,both soar free |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
What a touching picture you have painted! |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Well, this has to be the cutest haiku I've ever read.  Kaile, Take a look at the posts for the previous two or three days. There's lots of really good haiku there. ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching! Lovely haiku! Denise |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Shows how much you can put into a few words!  Yeah, this is definitely one of the most touching haikus I've ever read! Thanks for the great, if short, read! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Shows how much you can put into a few words! Yeah, this is definitely one of the most touching haikus I've ever read! Thanks for the great, if short, read! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
one of my earliest attempts at this form..now a question, will you accept this as a haiku or as a three-line short poem(even when it fulfills the syllables requirement)?....  |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Beautiful poem here, wonderful images and feeling expressed, who's counting sylables? Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kaile; This is so sweet and filled with caring and love. Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very sweet kaile.. and its your picture..you can paint it haiku, or whatever you like hugs, g "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is nice, Kaile, and heck, I didn't even count the syllables! It is easier to venture out in the world with someone you trust beside you, isn't it?To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwww this was sweet. I liked this a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kaile- this is so sweet.. what a wonderful picture you've penned. love it! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Kaile..you are such a gentle soul and it comes out in your poems..this is lovely. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I think that is more than companionship... That is love, motherly love, unconditional love... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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