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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
your lips so tender the stars explode as the tongues mate moist kisses follow contours of my neck the bittersweet pleasure of pain and desire as you sink your teeth into my flesh the tongue blazes a trail of fire your voice sends me spiralling higher hot from wanting you i writhe in agony tempting you with words you silence with your lips your hands talk i am out of control you dont stop i beg you laugh i await your possesion when, my love when? |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
When? Probably anytime you want. Excellent, very sensuous poem. You got me hot just from reading it.  ~Gene |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
*sigh* been there and done that...GOD I wish I was still there! Great Work!!! You got me right there in the moment!  --Jamie"You make it hard to breathe It's as if I'm suffocating And when you're next to me I can feel you're heart beat through my skin It makes me sad to think this could all be for nothing I wish there was a way A way for you to see inside me I've never felt this way About anyone or anything Tell me What do I have to do? To make you happy What do I have to do? To make you understand What do I have to do? To make you want me But if I can't make you want me, What do I have to do?" 'What do I have to do?'by Stabbing Westward |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
very passionate poem! Well written! Denise |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
This is a very sensual....great read! |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
thanx everyone i just wrote it last night wasnt sure of it |
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tom Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 90s/w penna u.s.a. |
Very hot, very very hot |
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Brenda Winniford Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 31 |
Wounderous, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem entitled "When" It has been such a long time for one to hold me close,and tell me they felt passionate. Thank you for sharing your poem with the world! May the angels watch over you Brenda W. |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
thanxs tom, brenda |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Wow!!!! Jon |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
You know, I think I'm getting red right now after reading this...I don't know if anything I could say could quite cut it, but I'll try... "This deserves to be framed!" lol Beautiful poem!!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
As Jon & Tom said - WOW! HOT!!! This isn't just sensuous. This is wonderfully written light (??) erotica!! |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
thanks jon, Little_Spyro, childomine this poem surprised me too |
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