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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Jade needles dancing Morning Dove adds harmony Spring wind song |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
INclan~ This is just a lovely, lovely thought. Wonderful image dances before me. Pirouetting on the stage Asphalt comes alive ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Nicely done, INclan.  ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well done, INclan and Marge! Delightful! Denise |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
First line really pierced me. "Jade needles dancing" Great haiku! Joy |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I'm with Joy - the first line was really piercing! |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Once again, INclan, you make me close my eyes and experience your thoughts... jk |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Well done Inclan !! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Spring wind song---your last line sums it up so perfectly...loved this |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
good one--i liked the image of the jade needles too! "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
INclan, So simple yet so profound, You've captured the moment so well! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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